This book is a mess, editorially. It's hardly readable, and yes, it's an ARC but I read a LOT of ARCs and this one is by far the worse one.
I certainly, as an author, wouldn't submit to a press that put out such shoddy work.
"...our child has an incurable and intractable brain disorder that will only respond a finite amount to any intervention, regardless of the intensity and cost that bankrupts some families. Maybe, autism is that inscrutable and permanent."
throwing this out there, society needs to ACTUALLY LISTEN to adult autistics. MANY OF US were in EXACTLY the same situations as Zack. As Gus & Henry, as all of the other of these books ABOUT us were & are.
"Zack has certainly made concrete gains through his many years of ABA, but might he have made similar gains in a public preschool autism program for no cost? Might he have ended up looking identical to how he looks now at age 5, or even
She says that 'recovered' autistics are 'exceedingly rare'.
I dunno, my #ActuallyAutistic community, are we? #AskingAutistics Are we 'exceedingly rare'? Or is she so deluded she hasn't any idea what she's talking about.
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I don't offer it to many ppl bcs I'm usually disappointed. It's just been my life experience.
Today I've realized that I'm likely to be friends for a very long time with one person I haven't talked to much lately bcs of life/baby stuff.
& I
sadly realized that two other peeps I had in the *friend* category have been demoted to *ppl I talk to sometimes*.
I don't really understand how or why that happens for me. It's very clear in my head, it's not something that's intentional in any way.
It just happens.
Usually
something happens that makes me realize they obviously don't feel the same way abt me as I did abt them.
Like if they considered us *casual mates* and I thought *found family*, or if they thought *potential love interest* and I thought *fun person to chat online with*
I snort every time I see people down on mobile eyebrows for writing stuff.
It's ridiculous. Do all y'all writers ever actually LOOK at another human's face? Eyebrows, lids & corners of the eyes are the MOST mobile & expressive parts of our faces.
Even more so than the mouth.
I am quite proud to cling to my eyebrow motions in writing. My brows are the easiest way for you to tell how I'm feeling.
I can control my mouth and eyes okay, brows? Not so much.
Wiggly eyebrows are GOOD when describing characters. As with anything it shouldn't be overused,
but it's like that REALLY AWFULLY BAD ADVICE to get rid of all instances of *was*.
Seriously, have you ever tried that? (I have, it equals a very horrible piece of prose.)
With all writing advice, please, please, please remember that it's YOUR story. YOU write it how y'all see